creative writing

He turned the key in the lock and opened the door. To his horror, he saw a mutant flesh eating zombie with three eyes it was at least 6 foot 5 it had scales all over it. It was a dull green color and had blood all over it. To my surprise it disintegrated right before my eyes behind him was a soldier wearing army uniform holding a gun he grabbed me before I could think. he put me in prison cell five.

The detective saw his opportunity. He grabbed the waitress’s arm and said ‘Im with biotech group number 4’ the waitress looked at him with a strange look and then the went to the back of the museum cafe and went to the freezer the detective followed she opened the door and put her hand on one the freezing cement wall and lights started to flash in the wall.the floor split to two sides revealing a stair case the detective went down the stairs and looked at the prison cells and stopped at cell five he called to the guard ‘why is this one here’ the guard replied ‘he seen to much’ the detective suddenly looked confused and said ‘cant you just wipe his memory’ the guard replied ‘cant it wont work this one is special.

The doctor put his hand on her arm and said gently, “You or the baby will survive. Not both. I’m sorry.” she gently asked ‘why?’ he said that it was just fait once the doctor had gone a strange man came into the room he asked her if she would sign these forms saying that her body would go to a research facility called biotech 4 she signed it and 3 weeks later she was shipped down to the facility her body was made into a zombie but she still had her brain functions they had done it they had brought someone back to life the zombie got up and looked around it saw the cell it went and released everyone in the cells there was nothing the staff could do about it.

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Letter

Lake gore


deer community members of western australia

the government would like to inform you that lake gore is in need of some saving so that we can keep the lake and all its wildlife we think that a few precautions should be put up for example if you ever go to the lake can you please pick up all the rubbish and if you are going to go in the water on a boat make sure that you do not have any fuel leaks because there is major pollution from fuel in the lake if the fuel kept leaking like this we would not be able to swim in it ever again.there has also been other chemicals in the lake that could be potentially dangerous to the people that swim in the lake in the next few years but if we stop leaking fuel or toxic chemicals in the lake it will remain a peaceful good to swim in lake.


This lake is worth protecting because it is a great lake and really fun for the whole family to visit and swim you can even bring your boat down but this wouldn't be possible if we didn't stop polluting in the lake.This lake is set apart from other lakes because of its circular shape it has a fantastic view and is truly a sight to be treasured.


we should save the lake it would be a wonderful thing to do and would benefit the community and wildlife in the lake greatly. The government thinks that is a great cause and we are going to set up a fundraiser to put money towards the lake we would love it if anyone would like to be involved call the number 0447365283 and we would be happy to have you if you would like to donate come down to the lake and have a barbecue and a drink all the money will go to the funding of lake gore.

it will be held 5 december 2011

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The Escape

The Escape

Step after step I forced myself to keep going through the deep, dark and murky forest. My feet were wet and I was puffing like crazy but I couldn’t stop otherwise that ork would take my brother and me to prison. John was slowing down. I called to him, “John, hurry up. I’ve only got one brother and I don't intend to lose you”. He called back, “I’m trying Jason but my legs are too sore”. The ork screamed out “I’ll get you kids, this time it’s serious you’re going to prison”. The ork took a leap a massive leap just like a cheetah and caught my brother. I slowed down and noticed the grin on the ork’s dark green face. John called out, “don’t give up. You can still get away”. I ran as fast as I could and eventually the ork gave up.

I had to get my brother out of prison. I went to the prison and snuck in. All of a sudden WHACK straight in the gut it was a guard and in seconds I was surrounded by them. I took one of their swords and struck. Red blood gushed everywhere. WHACK another one struck and they dragged me to a prison cell where it was dark, wet and horrible. After five minutes a guard came in with a massive grin on his face. In his arms was my brother YES maybe they’d put us in a cell together then it wouldn't be so bad but wait he had a silver dagger in his hands he put it at my brothers throat and slit it. His body fell on the floor. I started screaming and shouting and I tackled the guard. He got up, through me on the ground and left me in that cold dark cellar I started to cry.

I stayed there in the cell I didn't care anymore. It was my fault my brother died if I hadn’t slashed at the guard they wouldn't have killed him. I stayed there for a month until I noticed something. It was a piece of metal in the corner of my cell. It was a key. I checked it and yes it fitted my cell but I just left it there. I wanted to be in prison that's what I deserved. Another month or two went by I don't know I wasn't counting I thought about it. It couldn’t be legal I thought about it if he obeyed the law I decided to escape.

I picked up the key I opened the cell their were no guards I ran I turned the corner as fast as I could I went out the door to the inner walls I ran through I heard a roar it was a dragon o my god it was a fully grown dragon protecting the prison it started to breathe fire at me I took a sword of the ground and through it at its wing ran under it took of my shirt and through it up. The dragon burnt it. It looked like id been incinerated. I ran away. I was free.

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bully questions

Bullying question

1. It is not right for Leslie and jess to write a fake letter because they were trying to avoid bullying. By writing a letter jess and Leslie are sinking to Janice’s level and are just as bad as Janice. I do think that it is ok to get revenge but you can’t let it go to far.

2. In their situation I would go to a teacher and or the principal. If I were in their exact situation I would seek out advice from my parents first. If that didn't work I would confront the bully and tell them to stop and that I would call the police if they didn't (I wouldn't actually call the police)

3. Some alternatives to revenge are doing something not so serious something that didn't embarrass her so much e.g. to start a rumor that she’s in love with someone. I think that revenge is not the answer and should be avoided. No matter what the bully has done to you I don't think revenge is necessary as long as they stop.

4. In my eyes the bullies that I have faced are not invincible if you hit them back they will feel just as much pain. I also feel sorry for them because they bully people and they will not go very far in life. The reason they bully might be because they are bullied and therefore are defiantly not invincible.

5. Jess and Leslie reach out to her because they feel sorry for her and she deserved a second chance. The only reason she was bullied is because she was being bullied at home and she shouldn't of had to go through that. Another reason is that if they weren’t nice to her she may have kept bullying so they might have done it to stop her bullying

6. I would have been compassionate to her but only to an extent. If she had asked I would have given her the best advice I could of. I would have been more compassionate to someone who hadn’t been a bully.

7. Jess and Leslie have a different perception of Janice when they learn of the child abuse because they see that bad things are going on to her as well. If jess and Leslie hadn’t learned of the abuse then they would have thought that Janice was just bullying for the fun of it. Jess and Leslie do learn of the abuse and they probably think that this is why Janice is a bully.

8. Janice’s behavior changes rapidly towards the end of the story because of the way that Jess and Leslie treat her Janice finds out that treating badly is horrible and mean for example may bell loses her Twinkies this makes her upset. Towards the end of the story Janice is a lot nicer to everyone because she realizes how horrible it is to be treated badly. Janice’s symbolic terrabithian character changes towards the end of the story from a mean grumpy giant to a nice friendly giant for example it helps Jess so that he didn't fall. The giant changes because it gets defeated.

9. I think children tease and bully one another because it gives them a sense of power and that they are stronger than other people. It makes them feel better and that they have more pride. The victims of the bullying would feel terrible and humiliated but the would also feel sorry for the bully because

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Terrabithia questions

The forces of darkness represented by Janice become good by the end of the story because she the same problems as the good forces represented by Leslie and Jess. They end up giving each other advice. The revelation of child abuse to Janice sparks the changes. The transformation of Janice shows the audience that bad people can become good and sometimes people who do bad things are deeply sad because people have treated them badly.

I liked Leslie because she had an open-minded view of the world. She was kindhearted to almost everyone in the story and she was extremely generous. She also taught Jess to have an open-minded view of the world as well.

There are a few things that transform into Terrabithian-like creatures. One of them is my dog, Abbey, could transform into a hound with a bell on his head another one is our horse it could turn into a big ogre on four legs. When I am with Abbey I am happy to see such a happy energetic animal.

Jess eventually invites May Belle to Terrabitha because he sees that Leslie would of wanted it to be shared with other people and it is also a way to deal with his grief. This is an important movement to the film because Jess was deeply sad that Leslie died and it made a happy ending, or the resolution, to the story.

It can help people with grief because it creates a world of their own with no problems. Our imagination is an escape from the real world because you can imagine anything and you have no limits and no problems in your imaged world.

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what it means to be a gentalmen

to be a gentleman is to treat others like you would want to be treated to respectful of others and to have good manners

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